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Breach

Posted on 11 January 202012 January 2020 by H. Hennenburg
Image by Lightscape illustrating poem titled Breach by H. Hennenburg.
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Breach

When there is no view to the sea
I am reminded of the complexities and displacements
Shallows that engulf sentient beings
Leaving us stranded
With our monikers
For things we cannot name
Beveled edges bend the view
Until our eyes cannot attain clarity
Nor connect our own continuity to fluidity composed
But we embark on this odyssey
Unframed by expansion
And isn’t that the mandate of the universe?
Its sole prerogative
Amalgamations transcending
We are revoking and upending
What we’re meant to be
Mavericks waking cause to breach a higher sea

© H. Hennenburg, 12 November 2019

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18 thoughts on “Breach”

  1. Chrissa says:
    12 January 2020 at 10:29 AM

    This shift in this felt like clouds passing by, trying to see a shape in a shifting panorama. Wonderfully rendered.

  2. Bjorn Rudberg says:
    12 January 2020 at 12:51 PM

    I feel that sometimes the knowledge that the sea exists is a lot stronger than sea itself… which is what i felt reading your first lines… maybe imagination is stronger than us

  3. ZQ says:
    12 January 2020 at 1:48 PM

    Complex and well written.

  4. Magaly Guerrero says:
    12 January 2020 at 2:10 PM

    I think that our realities find power in the thins we can imagine (and in how we choose to imagine them). And I have agree with Bjorn’s last bit, “maybe imagination is stronger than us”… But imagination belongs to us. The more we reach for, the more we get.

  5. Sanaa Rizvi says:
    12 January 2020 at 3:37 PM

    My goodness this is good! The entire poem as a whole feels like the gentle lapping of waves on a shore that seek to rejuvenate the senses and evoke deeper meaning. 🙂

  6. gillena says:
    12 January 2020 at 4:05 PM

    This directs my gaze to horizons where sea and sky seemingly meet, all in the imagination of time

    Happy Sunday

    Much❤love

  7. Magical Mystical Teacher says:
    12 January 2020 at 4:32 PM

    “Shallows that engulf sentient beings” reminds me of Thoreau’s observation: “The mass of men live lives of quiet desperation.” What a great thing, instead of struggling in the shallows, or living in quiet desperation, to actually go on the odyssey for which we were made!

  8. Myrna says:
    12 January 2020 at 5:22 PM

    Yes. Life has so many complexities and displacements and we live in an uncertain sea. This poem, to me, had a thread of sadness about life and this world we live in. So beautifully written.

  9. Rommy says:
    12 January 2020 at 5:33 PM

    The enormity of all the unknown that stretches out before us can be frightening or exhilarating. Whether we find something to fear or inspire is up to us.

  10. Toni Spencer says:
    12 January 2020 at 6:19 PM

    I can feel the lapping of the waves and see the clouds drifting by. Lovely and complex.

  11. Thotpurge says:
    12 January 2020 at 9:32 PM

    upending what we’re meant to be… love the tone and message here!

  12. Rosemary Nissen-Wade says:
    12 January 2020 at 11:39 PM

    I hope you’re right!

  13. Jae Rose says:
    13 January 2020 at 3:26 AM

    I love how this builds to such a strong conclusion

  14. Colleen LOOSELEAFNOTES says:
    13 January 2020 at 8:03 AM

    It took me up a couple of notches. Thanks.

  15. Audrey M Howitt says:
    13 January 2020 at 9:53 AM

    Some of my first memories are of the water ow it pulled at the life in tidepools–I feel a kinship with the sea–and have never lived far away from it–your piece speaks to my heart this morning!

  16. Susie Clevenger says:
    13 January 2020 at 12:39 PM

    Imagination is so powerful. It opens our eyes to the a world as small as a seed and as grand as the universe. I love going to the beach and listening to the waves speak.

  17. Stranded Tree says:
    13 January 2020 at 8:07 PM

    “Leaving us stranded/With our monikers” – How can I not give a positive shout out for that! Well done for a multi-imaged spark of imagination.

  18. Anna :o] says:
    14 January 2020 at 6:40 AM

    I love the conclusion too -but really I love all of it.
    Anna :o]

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